Adrienne picks up where Couper’s second novel, The Book of Job Revisited,
leaves off. Book I: The Maquisard, speaks of an era of chaos that began with
the Asturias miners’ strike of 1934 and relationships born of Revolution, the
Spanish Civil War, World War II, and the Franco Regime of post-war Spain. The
violence, intrigue, and betrayal of the era gave birth to the next generation. Book
II: The Tyranny of Chaos, continues the story of post-war prosperity and a
generation split between the values of their parents and dissipation of drug
addiction and nihilism featured in the marriage between the addict, Adrienne
Fournier, and Nick Baker, a borderline psychopath. Adrienne courageously
struggles with abuse and alcoholism. Kidnapped by a Tijuana drug trafficker,
her former lover Max McGee and his fellow cab driver, Jimbo, become involved in
a climatic rescue along with her husband, Nick, and godfather, Alesandro.
Monday, February 9, 2015
Adrienne: The Chaos of Desire
Friday, December 19, 2014
1934: Asturias Miners' Strike
A group of villagers were huddled
at the side of the tracks leading into a mining town nestled between steep
hills. A woman patted a young girl on the head and slipped the girl behind her
skirts as the Guardia Civil ordered the group to line up. The girl scurried
away and down into the arroyo behind. The woman raised her fist in the air as a
distraction and a last gesture of defiance with a shout, “Viva la Revolucion!”
A man joined her with raised
fist, as did the others in the group. “Viva la…”
The girl scurried away down
into the arroyo before some of the bodies, neighbors she had known since she
was born, fell after a loud volley of Mausers. Then came a horrible silence
except for a restrained moan, a few pops and cracks of pistols. She watched
from her hiding place under a boulder as the refrain from an old lullaby passed
softly from her lips: “Los pollitos dicen los pollitos dicen pío, pío, pío
cuando tienen hambre tienen frío.” Tears clouded her vision. It would be the
last time she afforded tears to wash her face for over thirty years.
In English the whole verse is:
“The little chicks say, ‘pio, pio, pio,’ when they are hungry... when they are
cold. The hen looks for the corn... gives them food, and gives them shelter.
Under her wings sleeping chicks huddle together to hasten another day!”
Sleeping… hung-over… soothed
by the lullaby rhythm of steel wheels on steel tracks…
chunk-cat-clack…chunk-cat-clack… chunk-chunk… Then noise: a whistle… awake…
another town… steam hissed… exploded from pistons, escalated by the chatter and
clamoring of another group of volunteers boarding. Alesandro peered through
half-shut lids to watch the eager new ones standing in the aisle, falling
against each other whenever the train jerked to a start. He’d been crammed into
a seat on the wooden bench of the car, shoulder to shoulder, with young men…
young or younger than he. Their voices were, from the start in Madrid, loud and
boisterous… songs of the revolution… “A Las Barricades!” Bravado smothered fear
and anticipation, driven by the cheers of crowds alongside the tracks. Red and
black flags on “la locomotora del destino” chugged their cars away from the
station and from the safety of homes and chalkboards of classrooms. After this
disruption of not-thought, his attention turned to the changing Castilian
landscape that passed his window… images flashed by. The train wound its way
towards Asturias; another country on the far side of Spain. Some aboard were
CNT labor unionists, veterans of street fighting, but most were volunteers:
metropolitan boys with pink hands. The propaganda posters depict men; masculine
men with chiseled chins and muscled forearms, fists thrust skyward over the
barricades... men, not boys… boys who hoped to be greeted with cheers and
welcomed by the calloused hands of miners holding firm at the barricades of
Gijón and Oviedo, they would be heroes; heroes alright, dead heroes.
The train that left Madrid was
loaded up with untrained young and eager faces armed by little more than the
enthusiasm and the naivety of youth. Only a few had seen blood from more than a
scratch before and were unprepared for what awaited them in the mining towns in
and above Oviedo or Gijón on the Biscay coast. From Madrid they crossed north
through the heartland of Castile-Leon and into a region of rugged mountains.
Towns and stations that prominently posted the red and black flags of the
Revolucion flashed by Alesandro’s window like in a dream. The rails were
controlled by the anarchist labor union, the CNT, most sympathetic to the
cause. But, this was an irony of a civil war full of ironies that, in
cooperation with the new Republic in Madrid, the same union trains, controlled
by the same union, would fill its cars with experienced and hardened Moroccan
troops. Regular Army troops of Colonel Yague and General Ochoa, steamed towards
Basque Country under orders of the Generals of the Republic in Madrid,
Francisco Franco and Manuel Goded. Sent to quell the miners’ general strike
that had crippled most of the country.
Next to Alesandro snored the
fledgling journalist; his brother by adoption and Euskara blood. Euskara blood knows no nation but the Basque
Country of the coastline and mountains along the Bay of Biscay and the Pyrenees
Range of Southern France and Northern Spain.
Their bond, however, was stronger than the fraternity of blood.
Alesandro Otxoa was orphaned at five years of age by the pistoleros of the
Guardia Civil. Alesandro Otxoa had been embraced and given a home near Biarritz
by Marcel’s half-Basque father out of loyalty to the Otxoa family. It happened
during the general strikes at La Canadiense in 1919. One of his earliest memory
was that of a door being kicked in… of his father’s shouting… his mother’s
cursing… screams… both taken out the door… the sound of clap-crack pistol
retorts… their bodies lifeless on the street.
Alesandro took his secondary
level education at the Lycée Militaire and thus had an inkling of military
experience: little more experience than to know how to load and shoot a rifle,
to march in drills, and to study rudimentary military history on his own in the
school’s library. Therefore he felt responsible for, and protective of, Marcel,
whose military ambitions were next to nil and who wasn’t supposed to be on this
train in the first place.
The storm clouds forming in
the atmosphere over the Second Republic of Spain were dark with foreboding: a
civil war of which the life of Alesandro (Gotson) Otxoa would be entangled,
from his first taste of combat in this one week in October of 1934, until his
imprisonment in Carabanchel in the mid nineteen-fifties.
Alesandro was determined, and
obligated by his heritage, to leave the comfort and safety of Bayonne at twenty
years of age to join the CNT of the anarchist movement rising up in Barcelona.
There in Madrid, as soon as he heard the news of the strike, he tried to bid
farewell to Marcel over wine in a café alongside of other boys eager to become
men.
“You aren’t going without me,”
Marcel protested.
“There is too much going on
here, Marcel. The people need your voice. Someone has to keep an eye on the
political wrangling of Euro…” Alesandro rattled off his argument staccato
knowing his words were falling on deaf ears.
“I won’t have it Alesandro,
the hottest story in all of Spain is in Asturias.”
Taking a sip, holding the
bottle to his lips without mocking, he said sincerely, “You’re an academic,
Marcel. How well would you… would you be able to kill a man?”
“Ha, I can. Just as well as
anyone. Hell, we are all amateurs!” he argued.
The brothers got drunk… so
very drunk that Alesandro barely remembered agreeing to board the train singing
what would be the anthem of the revolution, “La Rhumba La Carmella,” and
chanting “¡Unidad, Proletaria Hermanos!” with the others. His stomach sick, he
came to and swore to himself that he’d never get drunk again. It was an oath
that he kept except for an occasional toast or to wash down stale bread.
Alesandro knew from the time he awoke aboard that train he was going to keep
his vigilance guardedly; for, one afternoon, his guard was down and his
drunkenness nearly cost the life of his little brother.
The miners were waiting behind
the barricades by the time Alesandro and Marcel had gotten through to the hills
above Oviedo. An eagle’s aerie of a
mining town nestled on the side of a precipice at the end of a snaking narrow
track was fortified with makeshift catapults ready to launch crates loaded with
sticks of dynamite from behind the barricades against the rails leading up to
it. The steep slopes to the sides and behind left no room to be flanked or room
for retreat. The engine stopped at the first barricade and backed down the
three cars that were left of the train. The brothers reported for duty in an
old barracks, an outpost of the Guardia Civil garrison from Oviedo. The miners
had overrun it the day before with hardly a fight. The representative, from
behind a desk that was made up of a plank over empty ammo boxes, wore a beret
with red U.H.P. letters on the front.
Marcel stepped up first. The
old gruff miner looked him over. “Ever fire a rifle?”
“I’m a journalist. I came to
cover the story,” Marcel admitted.
“You’ll need to cover the
story with one of these, kazetari... er, periodista.” The miner pointed to a
stack of old Spanish Mausers for a second miner to pass over the desk.
Alesandro’s union papers he’d
obtained before leaving Bayonne, and a certificate from a military prep school,
wasn’t enough to impress the old union miner.
“A cadet from the école
militaire,”
Those weren’t enough to
impress the old miner. But he spied the pistol tucked in Alesandro’s belt.
“The Regulars use a
Campo-Giro. How did you get that one?”
“My inheritance after…”
“Otxoa? I know of an Otxoa. An
organizer, Eder Otxoa, from twenty years ago. Otxoa and Izar.”
“My father and mother.”
“Ah ha, 1919.” The miner’s
face softened, “Yes, I was in Barcelona during the General Strike. You should
be proud.”
Alesandro stood silent.
“Give this man a new rifle,”
he called out to the second minor.
“You have command of the first
rampart, comrade. They send bodies up here from
Oviedo with no experience and
no ammo or guns,” he snarled. “All we have is what we seized from this
outpost.”
“I haven’t seen combat
either,” Alesandro confessed.
“Oh? Okay.” The miner shook
his head and continued, “More than most. If you have your father’s cajones…”
“I didn’t see any artillery
except for one field howitzer.” Alesandro returned to the subject.
“We do have plenty of
dynamite. When that’s gone, we’re gone. When someone falls, take what you can…
his rifle and ammo belt. Retreat to the second barricade, if you can, when it
gets impossible to hold ‘em off. Light
these sticks underneath yours first. Have you used dynamite before?”
“No, but is looks easy enough.”
“There are a lot of dead
miners that thought so too. Get someone to brief you.”
By token of being given a
command, issued this rifle, the dynamite, and blasting caps in his pack,
Alesandro’s unofficial rank was that of an officer. He was no an officer,
albeit, with little authority in the anarchist U.H.P. (the Union of the Brotherhood
of the Proletariat). Despite the recognition granted his education, Alesandro
knew his experience of warfare was little more than that of drilling on the
quadrant… marching in ranks and carrying a rifle.
“It doesn’t look good.”
Alesandro said to Marcel. He regretted more that he’d allowed his brother to
tag along.
At the barricade, Alesandro
and Marcel befriended a courier some simply called huérfana by the others. Or,
it would be better said that she befriended them. She could see right away that
Marcel would need instruction.
Marcel blushed, holding his
antique pre-WWI Spanish Mauser. Embarrassment and confusion in his eyes
betrayed his false machismo as he fumbled with the bolt of his rifle, having no
idea how to even load or shoot it.
Unaware of her abilities and,
thinking of her as only a child, Marcel made the mistake of showing patronizing
pity for the orphan when first met her. She had brought him wine with stale
bread and he warned her, “Be careful, Huérfana, don’t go poking your pretty little
head over the ramparts.”
“You be careful!” she snapped.
“You don’t even know how to handle that rifle…. Do you?”
“I know how well enough.” He
lied.
“I can show you around in case
you get scared and need to hide.” She parried.
“How old are you Huérfana?”
Alesandro challenged.
“My name isn’t Huérfana,” she
glowered, “It is Iniga and I’m thirteen.”
“Ten, really?” he countered,
as she looked no older than that.
“Twelve and a half then.” She
admitted, trying to stand taller.
Alesandro liked her attitude,
“Iniga? That’s Euskara, eh?”
“Yes, it is Basque and it
means desire!” before skittering away she stopped and turned, stomped her feet,
threw back her head, snapped her fingers flamenco style, and proudly
proclaimed, “I am Gitano too!”
They laughed at her Chaplinesque
image in canvas trousers stomping her bare feet and making dust instead of the
percussion of the clacking of heels.
The girl was always busy
running back and forth with the latest news, sometimes extra food, and even
ammo.
“I gave you my name,” she
demanded, “What are yours?”
“My name is Alesandro, and
this is my brother Marcel. I am also huérfano.” He looked over to Marcel to
confirm the truth of what he said because her eyes gave them both the scrutiny
of a prosecutor.
“Marcel? That’s French.” She
sneered, still looking at them with suspicion, “and Alesandro, that isn’t
Euskara,” she scowled impishly.
“Yes it is, Alesandro Otxoa…”
and elbowing Marcel, he added, “Marcel Fournier is going to be a famous
periodista from Bayonne.” He offered her a crusty piece of the bread she’d
given him.
“A kazetari, eh. I’ve never
heard of him, but, Otxoa? Ah, my father spoke of an Otxoa from Barcelona he
knew when he was young.”
“Eder Otxoa?” asked Marcel.
“Yes, that’s the name. I think
so.” Her expression was awestruck, her eyebrows pinched as she became serious,
“But we are orphans… we have no name but one we choose.” Her expression changed
from that serious tone to expectantly cheerful. “I am an orphan and my name is
only one.”
“We are orphans not
bastardos,” Alesandro pulled a crust of bread out of his coat pocket, “we have
names to live up to. What is your family name, Iniga?”
“My family is gone, I will
live up to my own name!”
Alesandro objected, “But it
was your mother and father that gave you your fire.”
She countered, “But they tried
to reason with murderers,” she set her face. “When I saw my mother and father
fall to the ground, I knew I was alone.”
“Here, watch closely,
periodista,” Iniga pulled the bolt back, put a spiral wire brush on the end of
a cleaning rod in the barrel and handed it back to Marcel. He followed her
instruction and proceeded to brush the rust from the barrel. She inspected it
several times before she handed him a swab on the rod to oil it. Only then did she give him a few rudimentary
lessons on aiming and pulling the trigger after which she took the gun back and
loaded five cartridges from a scarf bulging from her belt filled with several
rounds.
Iniga was a dynamo that never
stopped running off on errands. She’d be away ten minutes or an hour and always
came back with news of something useful like bread with sausages. Before
scurrying off again she instructed, “Look, if you hear the buzzing de abejas
near your ears, that isn’t the zumbido of bees… keep your head down ‘til you
see others on the line firing. Whatever you do, don’t be the first to lift your
head… even just to peek.”
A woman next to them had been
enjoying the lesson. After Iniga left she lit a cigarette and waved her hand
towards the track bed ahead, “Iniga was orphaned the day this strike
began. Her father was a respected
organizer of the miners and was shot there with his Romani wife as they were
announcing the fall of the garrison at Oviedo to the miners there.”
“She witnessed this?” Marcel
asked. He didn’t doubt Iniga’s word but his journalist instincts motivated him
to draw facts from multiple sources.
The woman continued, “Iniga
slipped away behind her mother into the arroyo. The whole town was forced to
witness the execution.... The execution that began the uprising here.
“You were forced to watch?”
“We evicted the Guardia
Civil,” proudly answered, “We took action from there. The Guardia Civil
retreated to their barracks, afraid to face the people and hoping to be rescued
by their Generals in Madrid.”
“How did you have weapons to
oppose them?”
“Ha, we had nothing we didn’t
take from them. We were armed with axes, shovels, a few hand guns and old
rifles. Men arose from the mine shafts and the women who been widowed and
children orphaned joined in too.”
Wednesday, December 17, 2014
The Last Chapter: Adrienne
Adrienne follows this. Found on Amazon |
Chapter 20: An A.A.
Meeting
Adrienne
sat in the back of the room hoping she wouldn’t be called on to share. She
listened to a woman in the front row going on about how bad she had it as a
child; how she always felt different; how she held secrets of infidelity and abuse;
how she had to work a Fifth Step with her sponsor; how she had to do everything
she was told; how she was told she had to put her shoes under her bed to make
sure she prayed and asked Jesus to keep her sober today; how she had to call three
people every day; how she had to dress like a lady; and how she had to be taken
to several meetings a week by her sponsor. This went on past the allotted three
minutes and dragged on for at least ten before she came to the end of her spiel,
saying, “I found God in Jesus Christ and I have to go to church. It works
because I’ve been clean and sober for six months and you have to do as I have done if you want to stay sober. Oh, yeh, and find Jesus too .”
Everyone
clapped.
The
woman was saying crap that disgusted Adrienne. This woman was an adult and
spoke like a child with an abdication of personal responsibility and obedience
that was submerged in a smothering submission. God, she thought, there must be
a better way to do this shit. All the while she thought of the others. Irene
was on suspended leave with pay until the investigation of Detective Ryan’s and
Richards’ deaths were unraveled. Nick was dead and his dad, Harry, too. Max was
in Cottage Hospital Intensive Care cuffed to his bed with a police guard for
over a week and he might not make it. He had been unarmed when Miguel put two
rounds in his back. If he does recover, he will probably have murder charges
slapped on him. Yuri bled out before the police arrived from Nick’s reflexive wild
spray of the MAC-Eleven. He’d been fatally wounded, a Spetsnaz special forces
style head shot, while she hid under the stairs of the wine cellar. Harry’s
body had been found on West Mountain Drive next to Ryan’s car. Ballistics had
his fatal wounds coming from the ravine where Max had been found with a Tec-Nine
nearby. Richards’ car was gone and there was no sign of Miguel. Richards’ car
was found a few miles away on Camino Cielo near San Marco Pass as though it had
been forced off the road. Three days later Miguel’s body was found near Red
Rock with injuries consistent with falling several hundred feet from nowhere. Alesandro
had gotten out of the country and, though she’d only met Jimbo once, she was
glad he got out of town before anyone knew of him or the Bell Ranger. Teresa
had been found pounding on the door to the stairs trying to get Irene out of
the death trap of the burning building. These were secrets she would never tell
a sponsor or anyone else. She would have to be tortured to tell of these things and, after all this, torture would be
easy for her. Still, she knew she belonged in that meeting room.
Teresa
was sitting next to Adrienne and clasping her hand lest she bolted out the door.
It was a sisterly affection they had for each other since they were rescued by
the police. That Teresa was in A.A. surprised Adrienne. They felt an immediate
kinship with each other. They had both suffered rape, incest, and addiction.
Both were from other countries. Teresa had immigrated to the USA before the
uprising of Solidarity in Poland but kept her Polish citizenship. Though she
usually dressed hippy-frumpy with reddish yellow hair in a tangled birds’ nest,
her translucent skin, delicate nose, and gentle eyes, radiated a beauty of
simplicity that Adrienne admired. She could see why Irene loved her so.
Teresa
was called on next. She spoke softly at first, “I haven’t any idea about this emphasis
on following direction from sponsors.” There was plenty of fidgeting around the
room as she continued more forcefully, “I mean, my sponsor... no, not my
sponsor! I don’t own a sponsor and a sponsor doesn’t own me. But I’ve worked
the Steps. I can’t think of a time any sponsor I’d ever listen to could have told
me how to dress or what meetings to go to. She has never mentioned God at all
except to say that the purpose of the Big Book is to open the door for us so
that we can find a power greater than ourselves sufficient for us to recover
from alcoholism. I go to therapy for anything beyond that. That is all I have
to say. I have no advice for anyone else. This is what has worked for me and I
have had the pleasure of doing these things the last five years.”
No
one applauded.
The End
Friday, October 24, 2014
Published on Amazon
Take a look at it. I'd appreciate comments. It does have adult content but nowhere is it lurid.
This is my second novel in a series of historical fictions. The next one is soon to be finished titled Adrienne.
http://www.amazon.com/Book-Job-Revisited-Taxi-Romance-ebook/dp/B00NY2JQYC

My first novel, A Time Ago and Then, of this series was originally published on smashwords.com but is now available on Amazon. The two novels are connected but stand on their own:
http://www.amazon.com/Time-Ago-Then-McGee-Book-ebook/dp/B00NY5F8Q4/
This is my second novel in a series of historical fictions. The next one is soon to be finished titled Adrienne.
http://www.amazon.com/Book-Job-Revisited-Taxi-Romance-ebook/dp/B00NY2JQYC
My first novel, A Time Ago and Then, of this series was originally published on smashwords.com but is now available on Amazon. The two novels are connected but stand on their own:
http://www.amazon.com/Time-Ago-Then-McGee-Book-ebook/dp/B00NY5F8Q4/
Tuesday, October 7, 2014
On to Asturias
Sleeping…
hung-over… soothed by the lullaby rhythm of steel wheels on steel tracks…
chunk-cat-clack…chunk-cat-clack… chunk-chunk… Then noise: a whistle… awake…
another town… steam hissed… exploded from pistons, escalated by the chatter and
clamoring of another group of volunteers boarding. Alesandro peered through
half-shut lids to watch the eager new ones standing in the aisle, falling
against each other whenever the train jerked to a start. He’d been crammed into
a seat on the wooden bench of the car, shoulder to shoulder, with young men…
young or younger than he. Their voices were, from the start in Madrid, loud and
boisterous… songs of the revolution… “A Las Barricades!” Bravado smothered fear
and anticipation, driven by the cheers of crowds alongside the tracks. Red and
black flags on “la locomotora del destino” chugged their cars away from the
station and from the safety of homes and chalkboards of classrooms.
After
this disruption of not-thought, his attention turned to the changing Castilian
landscape that passed his window… images flashed by. The train wound its way
towards Asturias; another country on the far side of Spain. Some aboard were
CNT labor unionists, veterans of street fighting, but most were volunteers:
metropolitan boys with pink hands. The propaganda
posters depict men; masculine men with chiseled chins and muscled forearms, fists thrust skyward over the barricades... men,
not boys… boys who hoped to be greeted with cheers and
welcomed by the calloused hands of miners holding firm at the barricades of
Gijón and Oviedo, they would be heroes; heroes alright, dead heroes.
The
train that left Madrid was loaded up with untrained young and eager faces armed
by little more than the enthusiasm and the naivety of youth. Only a few had
seen blood from more than a scratch before and were unprepared for what awaited
them in the mining towns in and above Oviedo or Gijón on the Biscay coast. From
Madrid they crossed north through the heartland of Castile-Leon and into a
region of rugged mountains. Towns and stations that prominently posted the red
and black flags of the Revolucion flashed by Alesandro’s window like in a dream.
The rails were controlled by the anarchist labor union, the CNT, most sympathetic
to the cause. But, this was an irony of a civil war full of ironies that, in
cooperation with the new Republic in Madrid, the same union trains, controlled
by the same union, would fill its cars with experienced and hardened Moroccan troops. Regular Army troops of Colonel Yague and General
Ochoa, steamed towards Basque Country under orders of the Generals of the
Republic in Madrid, Francisco Franco and Manuel Goded. Sent to quell the
miners’ general strike that had crippled most of the country.
Thursday, October 2, 2014
Shake My Cage
Chapter 9: Mad Max
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Shake my cage and free me from it. |
There
he was again, in County jail. Max’s life was looking like an old country song,
“I’m in the Jailhouse Now.” He tried to decipher the confusion… thoughts ran
wild… “Pardon me, Hank Williams, but I don’t want to be in one of your songs at
this moment, eh?” He thought he’d broken that cycle when he got sober but here
he was, thinking “Surely, I ought to be able to get out on O.R. first thing in
the morning… no outstanding warrants or fines… living pretty clean too…what
does all this have to do with a cosmic plan?”
A
newly familiar calm came over him as he sat on the bunk once all the noise of
the concrete and steel settled down after lights-out. Max was at peace and it
felt as though a hand was on his shoulder. He turned to look but no one was
there. So he sat with his back to the wall of the cell… Hell, he was given a
private cell, isolation they call it, and he waited there while his mind leafed
through old catechism stories… thinking again, “Would an angel appear before me,
shake my cage, and unlock it?” The gentle hand on his shoulder assured him and
he fell into a deep sleep.
The next morning Max still had the
feeling of that hand and everything became clear... all this shit. He didn’t
know how it would turn out or what motives and powers were behind it but he
knew for sure that he was to play an important part in some sort of cosmic
drama. It was a cosmic drama that made perfectly clear what his next step would
be. He hadn’t known such clarity since that day in the hooch with Kuka a decade
before.
“What…
Someone bailed me out?”
“I
don’t know… just roll it up!”
Three
in the morning: What the hell? He didn’t like the feel of it. “Was I out? I
could get a ride home from another cab driver, but shit,” he noticed that
Richards was parked at the far end of the parking lot. Just for the hell of it
he walked over to the squad car. When Richards opened his window, Max asked,
“Don’t suppose you could give me a ride into town… eh?”
“I
don’t think so. You know you’ve been snitched out by your junkie friends.”
Richards rolled up his window and pulled away.
The
cab finally arrived; his sponsor, Jim, behind the wheel. They’d been on the
road for a good five minutes before Jim asked, “So, what did that cunt do to get
you in jail this time, Max?”
At
that moment he had a newfound distaste for the “C” word… especially when
applied to Adrienne. He glared, “Drop the ‘C’ word, Jim.”
“Yeh,
yeh, okay,” Jim grinned, pleased at this change in attitude. “It was on the
front page of the News Suppress… but I wanted to hear your side.”
“I
can’t believe it Jim, but, back there in my cell, a calm came over me and I
felt a hand…” he gave Jim all the details.
“The
Hand of Gawd, eh?”
“Something
like that. I told you about Kuka. She came to me in dreams.”
“Awe,
c’mon, Max. Don’t go psychedelic on me.”
“No,
Jim, it is just that I now know there is a cosmic dance going down here and I’m
in the middle of it.”
“The
center of the universe, eh.” Jim scowled, “You know where that bullshit takes
you.”
“Yeh,
maybe you’re right...” Max admitted, “But there was this peace and clarity in
knowing.”
“Most of us didn’t think you did it and you
still have your shift on the roster at the cab company.” Jim assured him,
changing a subject that gave him the creeps.
“I
have to check and see if the city hasn’t pulled my license,” Max would’ve been
surprised if they hadn’t.
“I’m
sure you can still dispatch if they did… you got everyone in the office behind
you.” Jim had one eye on his rearview mirror, “A cop is tailing us.”
Sure
enough, Richards was following the cab, making no attempt to make his presence
unknown all the way back into town. He even parked at the end of the cul-de-sac
just past Max’s place.
“Did
the company bail me out?
Jim
hesitated before he answered, “Naw… Sue is too tight with the cash to do that,”
“Well
then, have you heard anything about Adrienne’s condition?” Max wondered if Adrienne
might’ve…
“Say,
you ain’t still in love with that bitch, are you?” Jim asked as Max opened the
door.
Max
sat back down a few minutes as though he was going to say something before Jim
continued, “Y’know, maybe you’re right. You got some karma with that chick. She
comes all the way to Santa Barbara… across an ocean and the whole damned
continent to hook up with you. It is cosmic… it is what it is, damned karma.”
Max
tried to sleep but couldn’t nod out while thinking of Adrienne… of Ryan; of
Richards out there, and wondering what those damned S.O.B.’s were up to. The
clarity he’d experienced in the jail cell clouded up once more.
Adrienne
didn’t bail Max out. All charges against him had been dropped. The DA saw no
chance for a conviction once she became able to communicate through her own
lawyer. She’d also lifted the restraining order on Max. No one was charged with
her beating either. It was very unusual for charges of spousal abuse or assault
against any woman to be dismissed so easily. The State usually pursues charges
even if the victim doesn’t want to. Max was curious about this lapse and
suspected it to be a covert corruption of the justice system. He seriously
wanted to know but he decided it was best to leave it be.
It
was his powerlessness over it all that bugged him the most. He was damned if he
was going to do nothing about her beating. Hadn’t he just spent a week in jail
without an apology or a howdy-do from the law? But, he already knew that the
justice system rarely, if ever, apologizes for its mistakes. Once they sink
their teeth into you, no matter whether you are guilty as charged or as
innocent as the baby Jesus, an ambitious prosecutor will comb the books to hit
you with anything to get a conviction… unless you have connections and Max thought
that he didn’t have any.
Wednesday, October 1, 2014
Adrienne (cont...) Danang
Chapter 8: Patrick Ryan

Richards
approached him waving the smoke aside and coughing… “What do you think?”
“He
didn’t do it.” Ryan blew smoke in Richard’s face.
“What
do you mean, he didn’t do it? Nick saw him coming up the hill on his
motorcycle…”
“You
mean, Mr. Baker?” Ryan didn’t like Richards… a sloppy cop that was too
enthralled with the power a badge gave him. Ryan knew Richards had a bone for
Max and he also knew Richards had another bone in his pants for Adrienne. “Then
how did McGee drop her off at the hospital in his taxi?” He glared at Richards
now, “Don’t piss me off, Dan. The receptionist at the ER witnessed that much
and we already know Mr. Baker is a damned good liar.”
Ryan
thought of himself as a good cop. He looked forward to starting each day with a
good case to investigate. Most cases
were as simple as putting together a kindergarten picture puzzle. However, he
hated cases where influence, old debts, and favors, filtered into his judgment…
the pieces of the puzzle get smaller and it takes on three or four dimensions.
He didn’t know what to do about Nick Baker because Nick Baker was a part of that
kind of a puzzle. Now we had this Max McGee getting entangled in this mess with
Richards pissing on the case files.
Ryan
had served in the Brown Water Navy on swift boats out of Qui Nhon in Viet Nam where
he met Nick's dad, Harry Baker. Harry Baker wasn’t in the Navy. He wasn’t in the Army. He
wasn’t in the Marines or the Air Force either. At first Ryan thought Harry
Baker was C.I.A. or maybe O.N.I. but soon learned Harry Baker was one of many
contractors hired by the services to do jobs... well, jobs that were, off the
record. Harry Baker was one of those people you had to work with in the services
that you respected but wouldn’t have wanted anything to do with off the job. Ryan’s
crew had dropped off this mysterious man in places no one but Charlie would
venture into and then pick him up a hundred klics down-river. Nothing was ever
said about these missions.
A
year or so later Ryan had been transferred to the O.N.I. and stationed at the
Saigon Embassy. Ryan was in his room when there was a knock on his door. He
hated these knocks on the door. He hadn’t slept a full night in a week and he
had been looking forward to hitting the sack for so long he’d stopped counting
the hours, “Go away!” He shouted from his pillow, “I’m off duty.”
However,
the way it works with the intelligence services, there is no such thing as off duty. His team had been investigating a case about the China White that was
being stuffed into the guts of those GI’s in aluminum coffins before being shipped
from Da Nang to Travis Air Force Base. Harry Baker wasn’t instrumental in
uncovering who was exporting it and to whom it was imported but he was involved
in taking care of the problem. Ryan’s team had uncovered the problem and, at
the head of the list under the magnifying glass was Ryan’s brother.
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Bonds that aren't easily broken... |
“Ryan,
open the door or I’ll kick it in.”
Ryan
had been expecting Baker... he’d looked him up and made contact through a
friend of a friend so he got off his cot and opened the door.
Ryan’s
work was supposed to be about investigating and accumulating evidence to be
turned over to Hoover’s suits for prosecution stateside. But for independent
contractors such as Harry Baker, it was about eliminating the problem
altogether. There was no official need for Ryan to bloody his gloves over a personal
problem like his brother. This was, after all, a very personal problem for Ryan.
His brother was stationed in Da Nang…William Ryan, Spec-4, at the Mortuary
Affairs Unit. The O.N.I. boys had pulled the covers on most of those involved in
the smuggling racket. William Ryan’s part was that of an amateur, way over his
head in it.
“So
what do you want me to do?” Harry Baker’s motives were oftentimes vague to Ryan
but, suffice it to say, that he always knew what strings to jerk, how hard to
jerk them, and how to use what he knew to some future advantage. The then Chief
Warrant Officer, Patrick Ryan, liked Harry Baker’s ability to get things done
but his likes and dislikes didn’t interest, or were of little influence, on
him.
Look,
I’m up for promotion. My brother...” Ryan was embarrassed to admit his motive but he was up for a promotion and the fact
that his own brother might be involved in smuggling heroin made him
particularly vulnerable. “I don’t want you to harm him beyond fuckin’ him up
enough...”
“...enough
to have him shit his pants out of this racket.” Harry paused a minute. He liked
Ryan and had seen him in action. Whatever corruption he might be involved in
was covered by the fact that he was good under fire. “You know you’ll owe me
for this one.”
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The China Beach Surf Club |
Harry
met with Willy Ryan at the China Beach Surf Club. It was a casual meeting in
front of the beer stand. Surf boards leaned against the beer shack, GI’s in
knee length cut-off baggies hung around with bottles in hand, waiting for a
set: it could have been from an Instamatic picture of any scene in Baja
California or anywhere else every surfer dreams of. The surrealism of a war
going on just a few klics away didn’t escape anyone’s consciousness. That is
what the beer, the rum, the vodka, the gin or the pot, heroin, and for some…
some are even said to chew on a taste of C-4 to get a kick assed mother-fuckin’
trippin’ high… that’s what all of that was for… to blot out the faces of
smiling gooks from out of the dark of a hootch or the thump of mortars and the
AK’s staccato clack of caps busted... decapitations… punji sticks, legs and
limbs… bloody shit and guts spilled out… all of it that was surely awaiting the
next patrol. The chances that the award for service, beyond getting fucked up
in one of the above aforementioned ways,
was very likely to be in one of those aluminum boxes Army Specialist William
Ryan had been packing up to be shipped back to Travis for the past six months.
Reaching
out a hand to greet Harry, Willy offered, “Ya fuckin’ wanna Tiger Piss?”
Harry put a hand
forth, wrapping his huge paw around the un-calloused hand of a man who’d not
done a lick of work in several years. “No thanks, I’ll stick with a Schlitz.”
“Pat
told me you’re some kind a skivvy honcho… got some fuckin’ Mo-Jo of some sort,
eh?”
The
word, fuck, Harry never did like it…, no matter where there were GI’s in
Vietnam everything was fuckin’ fuckin’… mother fucker…, fucked-up, fucked-over
and fuckin’ this or fuckin’ that. No offense was meant by the term and no
offense was taken but Harry just wanted to get on with his business and get it fuckin’
over with.
“I
want you to listen real close to me,” Harry paused long enough to make sure the
kid was listening.
“I’m
all fuckin’ ears,” Willy’s brain was in high gear wondering, who the fuck did
my brother send over here behind these pilot’s sunglasses?
“You
have a choice… You need a change of scenery,” Harry pulled out a manila
envelope. “Read ‘em.”
Willy
held the papers away from the sunlight for longer than it would have taken him
to read them twice… … a lateral transfer to the Marines… report to Camp Schwab…
rank and all. He knew the training camp in Okinawa… he’d stuffed enough of the
Corps’ corpses to know what the line at the bottom of the form meant… Marine Recon
units were trained there.
“Okinawa?
What the fuck? A Marine recon unit? Who the fuck are you?” The papers trembled
in his grip. “Shit, I ain’t being trained for fuckin’ recon… I ain’t never even
been through grunt fuckin’ boot camp! How can I…?”
“Your
question ought to be, what is my choice?”
“I
don’t fuckin’ get it.” Like a rat in a maze… Willy’s mind had no idea where it
was being led. It hit on the idea that this had to do with an O.N.I.
investigation, or something like that… maybe his brother was tipping him off by
sending this guy. “You got fuckin’ nothing on me. Even if you fuckin’ did, I’d take
the Stockade at Presidio over humpin’ the paddies like a pig-fuckin’ grunt.
“No
one said anything about Fort Mason.” Harry took off his shades so that there
was no doubt left at all about his steel grey eyes.
“Hey,
does the lieutenant know about this?”
“No,
you’re in the clear… just another body-bagger that can’t take it anymore.”
Willy
tried to stay composed but he was damned near shittin’ his pants, “Let me get
this straight, you ain’t talkin’ stockade?”
“No,
I’m not talkin’ prison.”
Peculiar
things happen in life that turn a guy like Willy around. His first tour in Recon
gave him a taste of blood… he loved it… loved it so much that he re-upped…
loved it so much that, after he recovered from shrapnel wounds in Okinawa, a
couple Bronze Stars and a Purple Heart, he went civilian contractor for the
P.R.U. He took his bullet in Cambodia or Laos… no one says… no one cares… he
was a civilian and the body counts are for G.I.’s. He never got to go home in
one of the silver caskets either… his newfound honor bought him a hole in the
red clay. In spite of that, CWO Patrick Ryan was beholden to Harry Baker
because, in a way, he’d saved his brother and, well, these are the bonds that
aren’t broken very easily.
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