I've had to do some serious
rewriting of this one and cut out the parts that were taking us in another
direction that became fodder for my fourth book: changed the POV to third
person singular... I can’t write from a woman’s point of view… if no one has
noticed, I’m not a woman. I can observe women but I am not one… sooooo.
… Also the story had branched
off into Gotson’s and Adriane's father's. This caused it to become more of a
war-crime/intrigue/mystery story than where I wanted it to go. I'll let the
sequel to this one take it there but I want to explore Adriane's addiction and
how the enabling of wealth and privilege can be so crippling to
recovery. I’ll post the changed manuscript as I go along… now.
